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Friday, July 30, 2010

The Adventures of Carlose Greene

Sorry I've not been posting, but I have been busy, but in the mean time I wrote a book.
SAVING THE MAYOR
Once upon a time, there lived a monstrous sneaky bear named Carlose Greene with fiery red eyes, and a stuffed tummy.
One day while walking to get the mail with his hands flying freely around, he then saw a car stop in front of the squirrel Mendoza Bartenie’s driveway, Mendoza stepped out "Thanks.” said Mendoza “I’ll see you tonight right.” asked another squirrel “Yes like planed.” Said Mendoza “I wonder what they are up to” said Carlose curiously, after that Carlose still curious went inside to put the mail away and came right back out to water his flowers.
As Carlose was watering his flowers when he turned off the water he saw a couple cars go in to Mendoza’s driveway, after Carlose finished putting the hose away he went inside and sat on the couch, he started to fall asleep when all of a sudden he heard a car start he went and looked through the window to see what it was, and he heard ”Mendoza come on.” whispered the same squirrel that he heard earlier “I’m coming” whispered Mendoza “I still have to get the gun.” after Carlose heard that he ran and jumped on his bike he was at the bottom of his driveway, he waited and waited and than they left Carlose pelted after them with his pistol in his left pocket, he never left his pistol behind on cases like these, they turned left and right,they final made it to there destination it was the mayors' house but why would they want to go there but he know that it must not be good, he ran around back he know right where the mayor slept, it was a good thing he brought the grappling hook with him, he threw it right through the window, it was a good thing the mayor had his window open or that would make a lot of noise, he climbed up it and finally he made it “that was a long way up” he thought to himself “Mayor, Mayor wake up.” said Carlose “BOOM” the front door had fallen over and he didn’t have too much time