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Friday, October 29, 2010

Carlose Greene part 3!

Part 3
Allies
The next day Carlose sat up in bed just for a couple minutes remembering what happened the night before, he got up and went downstairs and made some coffee, after a little bit the Mayor came downstairs
“Good morning.” said Carlose “How did you sleep?”
“Horrible, the mosquitoes kept on biting me.” said the Mayor still sleepy
‘Oh sorry, Um may I ask what would you like for breakfast?” asked Carlose
“Bacon and two eggs.” said the Mayor
“Ok.” said Carlose “Um about last night did you know those guys?”
“ No of course not why they where going to kill me right.” said the Mayor
“Ya I just wanted know.” asked Carlose
“Um how is my breakfast coming along?” asked the Mayor a little sacred as if Carlose know something
“Oh, I forgot.” said Carlose the Mayor as he turned “Smack” his head hit the cabinet.
Carlose walked back in to the room he looked out the window and saw a squirrel sitting on the bench right across the road he walked back to where the Mayor was sitting (with his eyes still on the squirrel) “Here’s your breakfast.” said Carlose
“What are you looking at?” asked the Mayor
“Um, oh there is a squirrel an the bench across the road.” said Carlose
“Oh really?” said the Mayor “That one?” asked the mayor pointing at the bench
“Don’t point, he might see you.” said Carlose
“Oh ya your right.” said the Mayor dropping his finger
“Try to think of a way we can capture him.” said Carlose, Carlose walked around the room(with his hands behind his back)
“I got an idea.” announced the Mayor happily “What is it?” demanded Carlose “you walk around the house why I am pretend talking to you than you can sneak around him and capture him.” said the Mayor still proud of himself.
Carlose opened and shut the door so quiet that even a whisper could have been louder, he first started crowing on his hands and knees than when he got to the end of the wall he got on his tummy and started inching his way across the tree line, he finally got to behind the bench he waited awhile and then jumped up and grasped his neck
“What are you doing here?” Demanded Carlose
“Mendoza fired me just a few minutes ago so I was waiting on the bus.” said the squirrel trying to pry Carloses hands to get some air.
“Are you sure ?” asked Carlose with on eye shut
“Yes.” said the squirrel, Carlose slowly let go of Manny
“Ok, what is your name?” asked Carlose
“Manny Trolley.” said Manny
“Well Manny Trolley my name is.”
“Carlose Greene.” Manny interrupted
“How did you know?” asked Carlose
“Every one knows you name.” said Manny
“Oh, are you hungry?” asked Carlose
“Yes, I have not eaten since Yesterday.” said Manny.
Carlose and Manny both walked in side the Mayor ran and opened the door
“Awe you captured him that fast.” said the Mayor
“Oh no Mayor this is Manny.” said Carlose
“It is so nice meeting you, but I must be going.” said the Mayor after saying good-bye Carlose and Manny went inside.
“I wander where is he going?” wandered Carlose “Oh and he didn’t eat his breakfast.” said Carlose “What are you looking at?” asked Carlose
“Oh I thought I saw him some where, oh but where is my breakfast?” said Manny Happily
“Hay Manny do you have a place to sleep?” asked Carlose Manny shock his head
“Oh well I have a fold out coach would you...” before he could finished Manny nodded his head so fast “Ok, after you finish I can show you where you sleep.” said Carlose, Manny finished his food a little bit after that
“Ok here are some blankets here is a pillow I think that is all.” said Carlose “Thanks.” said Manny “Your welcome.” said Carlose.
It was getting darker and darker “The Mayor still has not come home yet where could he have gotten to?” wandered Carlose then they heard a whistle they looked out side and it was as they expected the Mayor, the Mayor walked inside “Where have you been?” asked Carlose “Walking around town, where else?” asked the Mayor “Ok it was a little scary when there is a murder on the lose.” said Carlose “I might go to bed I’m a little tired.” said the Mayor, the Mayor walked upstairs and closed the door
Carlose walked around the house turning off all the lights Manny was still a wake “What are you doing not going asleep.” asked Carlose
“Oh I just can’t seam to go to sleep.” said Manny
“Oh well you might just try to get some sleep we got a busy day a head of us.” said Carlose
“Ok.” said Manny as he flipped over and fell asleep slowly by slowly.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

very nice Josiah! Keep up the good work! :)

Bennett Looper said...

Hey Josiah!
Nice post! Great story. You gotta post what you want for Christmas!
Can u put the follower gadget up, 'cause i really want to become a follower! :)
Your friend,
Bennett
P.S. I made an airsoft team blog
at teameaglestrikeairsoft.blogspot.com

Daughters of Virtue said...

Great job, Josiah! You are very creative. :)
~Carrie

Josiah Johnson said...

Thanks Ya'll.
Ya'll are very encouraging.
Your in Christ,
~Josiah