Readers' Corner!!

Friday, May 27, 2011

Carlose Greene Book Nu. 3 Ideas?

Hey Everybody!
Just wanted to ask my reader's (All 1 of them :) what they think would be a good third book?
So what ever you think!
And keep it to a minor level of violence okay I might have kids read this later! Just Kidding!
Thank you for your time!
~Josiah

Thursday, January 27, 2011

New Year New Book!!

Hey Everybody!
Since it is a new year I thought of doing a new book even though I'am going to do my Carlose story's I thought of making it in World War 3.


Chapter 1
The Beginning of all our Troubles

General Grant and his men ran from building to building trying not to be seen by any Muslims that might be walking around the town or what was left of it.
They finally made it to their destination the tallest building in the town but not any more after the bombing.
“Okay, Jack you and your men go in the front go to the top floor and get the part on the table, John will follow you to the third floor and then your on your own.” Grant said looking around to see if any Muslims had followed them.
Jack and John’s men ran slowly in so not to be heard.
“Sir how long do you think this war will last?” Said eighteen year old Jacob who had been drafted when he was seventeen “Sir how long do you think this war will last?’
“Why, are you bored?” asked Grant
“Oh no sir just it has been going on for a while and well…” Grant interrupted him before he finished.
“Well it might go for a little longer but not to long I hope.” Said Grant right once he finished there was a U.S. army airplane bombed the building right next to us then the Muslims shot with the biggest bullets they had.
“Their going to kill them aren’t they?” asked one of the solders.
“Yep they are so heartless that they could kill anyone for nothing couldn’t they General?” asked a nether one of the solders
“Yes they would that’s why we need to hurry.” Grant said.
“Sir is this?” asked John showing Grant the Part.
“I guess so I have no idea.” Said Grant “let get out of here now.”

Later that day Grant went to give Dr. Alex Bonterser his part to who knows what.
“Come in, come in Grant please have a seat.” Said Dr. Banterer
“Thank you.” Grant said sitting down.
“Did you get it?” asked Alex.
“What, oh yes here it is.” Said Grant “Is this it I didn’t know you didn’t tell me.”
“Yes this is it thank you can go now.” Alex said
“Alex what is that.” Grant asked
“You will see later when the time is right I just can’t take chances right know when I haven’t got it ready, you know what I mean don’t you Grant?” Alex asked
“Yes I do thank you.” Grant said leaving the room.
“What did he say?” asked Jacob.
“What oh he said that he doesn’t want me to know what it is until it is ready.” Said Grant Angryish “Aren’t you supposed to be keeping guarding the out posts?” asked Grant.
“Yes but it is so stupid I stand there for a long time and never have something happen that is fun.” Said Jacob
“That is the one job that you DON’T want something to happen.” Said Grant “Now go and do your job.”
“ Okay.” Jacob said leaving.

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Book nu.2

Chapter 1


The Shooter






Carlose and Anna walked to the place where Suze got shot.
“This is the place?” asked Carlose as he looked closer to the road.
“Yep I could never forget it.” said Anna about to cry, Carlose got to a squatting postion.
“And there is where you swerved into the shoulder?” asked pointing to the car trackes that lead to the steep hill.
“Yep.” said Anna wiping off some tiers.
“And what about the truck driver?” asked Carlose standing up.
“Well he only helped me out of my car and then left but he had blue eyes and that is all I can remember.” said Anna
“He just left like that?” Asked Carlose
“Yep, but I called the cops and they came to help.” said Anna
“Okay, well we had better get back.” said Carlose
“So you are going to help me right?” asked Anna
“Yes of course I am but it will be a little harder than I thought.” said carlose after opening Anna’s door.
“Why?” asked Anna after Carlose go in.
“Because it is all wooded so it will be hard to find the persons hideout.” said Carlose.
“Hideout, what do you mean?” asked Anna
“The place he shot from.” said Carlose, the rest of the way Anna was silent because she was remembering the events that had happened the day before the sad events.
Carlose droped Anna off and went home, Carlose walked in slowly so not to wake up Manny but it didn’t work.
“So what is it do you think you will be able to do it or not?”
“Well it is going to be hard to see it is all wooded so it is going to take time to find him but do you know something so weird the truck driver just helped her out and left.” said Carlose
“That is so weird.” said Manny starting to yawn.
“You look tired.” said Carlose
“So do you.” said Manny laughing
“Well goodnight to you to.” said Carlose laughing “Night see you tomorrow.” said Carlose as he walked up stairs.
He stood at the door for a little and wondered what happened to the shooter how he got out and then walked in the rest of the way and turned out the lights to go to bed.