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Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Book nu.2

Chapter 1


The Shooter






Carlose and Anna walked to the place where Suze got shot.
“This is the place?” asked Carlose as he looked closer to the road.
“Yep I could never forget it.” said Anna about to cry, Carlose got to a squatting postion.
“And there is where you swerved into the shoulder?” asked pointing to the car trackes that lead to the steep hill.
“Yep.” said Anna wiping off some tiers.
“And what about the truck driver?” asked Carlose standing up.
“Well he only helped me out of my car and then left but he had blue eyes and that is all I can remember.” said Anna
“He just left like that?” Asked Carlose
“Yep, but I called the cops and they came to help.” said Anna
“Okay, well we had better get back.” said Carlose
“So you are going to help me right?” asked Anna
“Yes of course I am but it will be a little harder than I thought.” said carlose after opening Anna’s door.
“Why?” asked Anna after Carlose go in.
“Because it is all wooded so it will be hard to find the persons hideout.” said Carlose.
“Hideout, what do you mean?” asked Anna
“The place he shot from.” said Carlose, the rest of the way Anna was silent because she was remembering the events that had happened the day before the sad events.
Carlose droped Anna off and went home, Carlose walked in slowly so not to wake up Manny but it didn’t work.
“So what is it do you think you will be able to do it or not?”
“Well it is going to be hard to see it is all wooded so it is going to take time to find him but do you know something so weird the truck driver just helped her out and left.” said Carlose
“That is so weird.” said Manny starting to yawn.
“You look tired.” said Carlose
“So do you.” said Manny laughing
“Well goodnight to you to.” said Carlose laughing “Night see you tomorrow.” said Carlose as he walked up stairs.
He stood at the door for a little and wondered what happened to the shooter how he got out and then walked in the rest of the way and turned out the lights to go to bed.

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